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ayumi wrote:This is my homework. I need you all help me check for mistake grammar, preposition,nouns, pronouns and phrases

Question : How to make a Toast

My answer :

1. Firstly, decide what type of bread that you would like to use for making your toast. The only breads that you can use is regular white bread or specialty bread like wholewheat bread.

2. Once you have selected your bread, decide how many pieces of toast you want. Place your slices of bread in the toaster.

3. Then, press your toaster's lever down until it catches and set the level of the toaster.

4. When the toasting is completed, your toasted bread should jump out of the slots.

5. Next, carefully remove toast from slots and place onto a plate.

6. Use the knife to put on whatever topping you like. Spread toast with butter, peanut butter, jam or whatever you prefer on one side. If you put on the topping while your toast is still warm it will spread easier.

7. When it�s all done, your bread is now ready to serve.

ayumi wrote: ayumi's answers:

1. Firstly, decide what type of bread that you like to use for making your toast. The only bread that can use is a regular white bread, or specialty bread like whole wheat.

4. When the toasting is completed, your toasted bread should jump out of the slots.

5. Next, you'll want to carefully remove toast from slots and place onto a plate .